All Comments on 'It's a Dead Man's World Ch. 03'

Really one of the best stories I ever read here. Keep up the good work, Im dying to read on.

This story also consists entirely of f/f sexual intercourse.

now there's a line to catch your eye and make ya stay to read on!

and it was great...

can't wait for more...

XXOO

This story combines all of the things I like best about my favourite genres: Science fiction, fantasy, action, adventure, ... But, even better, it's well written! Such craftmanship! You've got character development, plot, suspense, grammar (!), wit and style. And it's sexy too!

Beauty and Brains (so to speak), a story I could fall in love with...

I cried,I laughed, I on the edege of my seat and still waiting. This story should be made into a movie, it's that good and loved every minute.I'm about to burst on wanting more.

I couldn't even predict what happened. Bravo! ---->

perhaps the sex scenes are a little bit long. love the plot's twists and turns always keeping us guessing

The sex is wordy. I am finding it repetitive and uninteresting, but I am getting better at scanning.