All Comments on 'It's a Dead Man's World Ch. 04'

by Evil Alpaca

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Bravo, Bravo!

Each chapter keeps getting better and better! I'm sure I'm not the only one here with your author's page bookmarked, continually checking for the next chapter to be posted. Again, bravo! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
<<applause>>

Fantastic! I love this story! I can hardly wait for the next part. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
NEED MORE

I'm on the edge of my seat and then the story ends. There are no words that describes how good these stories are, they are by far the best stories i've ever read. i just can't waite for the next chapter. your storie is truly the best ever, please think about publishing them.

*c*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Aaarrrgh

Great, just leave us hanging to wonder what happens next, the lady or the tiger. Great work though. Please finish or continue the story.

lalailalaialmost 19 years ago
Whew!

The action, the suspense does not let up! And I am almost sizzling with anticipation. Grrreat!

lundelundealmost 18 years ago
As good as Full Moon Strays

Amazing story. The plot, the characters, the universe, everything is well made and thought through.

I've only found one inconsistency and that is the location of the Point. In chapter one it's located in France, and in this chapter it's located in North Carolina.

I can't wait to get on with the rest of the story.

lundelundealmost 18 years ago
As good as Full Moon Strays

Amazing story. The plot, the characters, the universe, everything is well made and thought through.

I've only found one inconsistency and that is the location of the Point. In chapter one it's located in France, and in this chapter it's located in North Carolina.

I can't wait to get on with the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
hoo rah! eliza makes it home!

almost seems like things are settled down for eliza but back on terra, she's different now... unique. i sense intriguing plots ;)

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