All Comments on 'It's A Kind Of Magic'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not bad

I would like to read some more about how their relationship flourished and about some of those magic parties.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very well written...

story. Very sensual, without senselessness. Realistic descriptions, in a believable sequence, to a good feeling conclusion. Thank you!

Rapier875Rapier875almost 8 years ago
Very nice, right up until the ending.

The end rather spoilt it all.

It would have been better, for me anyway, had you not split them up at the end. That took the gloss off of the whole story for me.

But what went before was very good.

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