by grumpyg
I would like to read some more about how their relationship flourished and about some of those magic parties.
story. Very sensual, without senselessness. Realistic descriptions, in a believable sequence, to a good feeling conclusion. Thank you!
The end rather spoilt it all.
It would have been better, for me anyway, had you not split them up at the end. That took the gloss off of the whole story for me.
But what went before was very good.