by EenViezeVent
This story seems very familiar to another orc story about mother and son. Same occupation and same small orc son. Just felt like a repeat. A few changes but same storyline
Great story, thank you.
Admittedly I was like WTF, when you had Marcus being an ass on the road and she wasn't hurting him, but when Glasha delivered the sword I was hoping she would just use it on them and be done with it, but no, YOU had to put a twist to the whole thing and introduce the "Hulk" into the fight! DID NOT see that coming! Well done!
So different that the normal stories here. I enjoyed the character development, the build up, and a hint of continuation. I could have done without the impregnation, but different strokes for different Orcs. Then Marcie could be inserted also. Many possibilities, so carry on. I enjoyed your writing.
Please make more like this one but have it where the son usurps the father and takes over
Oddly enough it brought me back to my adventuring days with my half orc companion Redeye. Great times.
Loved the story and I know it appears youโve ended it, but you could go so much further. Maybe some pushback from the massacre earlier in the story? Hereโs hoping and thanks so much for sharing!
Reminded me of my gaming days, except, my characters' experiences didn't go that far. Maybe you could expand on the world?
What a wonderful and loving story between a Mother and Son.
I really enjoyed this. Thank for sharing it with us.
Wow. Need mire stories like this. Hope you keep writing such stories.
And thanks
Wonderful story. Keep up the good work. I have really enjoyed reading your stories and still have quite a few to go.. Definitely 5 ๐๐๐๐๐...
I somehow feel and think that incest was a bit more acceptant back in those times. Where today if you fuck your mother and give her a baby you both are in big trouble. But back then it might have been so much easier.
One of the best storys i ever read, however i wish there were some scenes with Xruul using his power to dominante his mother, a missed opportunity there
Well shit, this story turned out to be awesome as heck. The fantasy/magic angle really worked and added something new for me. Loved the part when the son went full Hulk and just murdered everyone that was harming his mom.
I kept waiting for him to use his Orc Rage powers for some super loving, but it never came. Shame :(