All Comments on 'It's Just the Two of Us'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Confused

This story seems very familiar to another orc story about mother and son. Same occupation and same small orc son. Just felt like a repeat. A few changes but same storyline

NewnotsureNewnotsureover 5 years ago
Good read

Good read this on could go on a few more chapters

WilliedaFoeWilliedaFoeover 5 years ago
LOL ! Just Wow!

Great story, thank you.

Admittedly I was like WTF, when you had Marcus being an ass on the road and she wasn't hurting him, but when Glasha delivered the sword I was hoping she would just use it on them and be done with it, but no, YOU had to put a twist to the whole thing and introduce the "Hulk" into the fight! DID NOT see that coming! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Awesome story hope you continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome

So different that the normal stories here. I enjoyed the character development, the build up, and a hint of continuation. I could have done without the impregnation, but different strokes for different Orcs. Then Marcie could be inserted also. Many possibilities, so carry on. I enjoyed your writing.

Animefan2929Animefan2929over 5 years ago
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Give this story a 10** man, great read!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great job

Please make more like this one but have it where the son usurps the father and takes over

SwifthawkSwifthawkover 5 years ago
Absolutely fantastic!

Oddly enough it brought me back to my adventuring days with my half orc companion Redeye. Great times.

Loved the story and I know it appears youโ€™ve ended it, but you could go so much further. Maybe some pushback from the massacre earlier in the story? Hereโ€™s hoping and thanks so much for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really good

Maybe your best yet. Sadly it was the end.

jneric2691jneric2691over 5 years ago
Loved the story!

Reminded me of my gaming days, except, my characters' experiences didn't go that far. Maybe you could expand on the world?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
"worshipping|"

adorable story more please ( INCENSED)!))%

Happyman47Happyman47about 5 years ago
It's Just The Two Of Us

What a wonderful and loving story between a Mother and Son.

I really enjoyed this. Thank for sharing it with us.

Tazz79905Tazz79905about 5 years ago
Great story

One of my favorites of all the stories I've read. Great job.

DhamakaDhamakaover 3 years ago

Wow. Need mire stories like this. Hope you keep writing such stories.

And thanks

Jutah3995Jutah3995about 2 years ago

Wonderful story. Keep up the good work. I have really enjoyed reading your stories and still have quite a few to go.. Definitely 5 ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I somehow feel and think that incest was a bit more acceptant back in those times. Where today if you fuck your mother and give her a baby you both are in big trouble. But back then it might have been so much easier.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the best storys i ever read, however i wish there were some scenes with Xruul using his power to dominante his mother, a missed opportunity there

NesticNestic9 months ago

What sublime work of "ART". Unmatched!!!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Well shit, this story turned out to be awesome as heck. The fantasy/magic angle really worked and added something new for me. Loved the part when the son went full Hulk and just murdered everyone that was harming his mom.

I kept waiting for him to use his Orc Rage powers for some super loving, but it never came. Shame :(

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