All Comments on 'I've Seen The Way You Look At Me'

wow-that was most erotic and tantalizing

this story was awesome . so very exciting and very very erotic.

i was sold from the start of this pure sexual tention between both women. I wanted this story to go on and on. I,ve seen the way you look at me. i could almost see it to briilliant story fantastic writing. more please

That was nerve-wracking and so erotic. Excellent writing.

You just have to continue this story. Saying it was amazing is an understatement! X

Truly one of the most erotic and seductive stories I've read on Lit. Really looking forward to a next chapter!

The anticipation was exhilirating! I loved it!

Please write some more!

I was getting wetter and wetter as I read, then when I reached the part about the pussy juices on the back of the neck - I actually came! A short, sharp shock of an orgasm. But it was really funny, because just as I came, the doorbell rang, so there I am skipping to the door with my lips all slippery-slidey, and little aftershocks bouncing off my clit with every step I take. I think the UPS lady must have known what was going on, because she had a slight little knowing look on her face while I was signing for the package, then as she turned to go I'm positive she took a deep breath, like she was trying to smell me.

Anyway, as soon as I closed the door I threw myself on the couch and had my fingers inside me in seconds - I was way beyond drenched! I came properly in about thirty seconds, and just lay there like a dribblng wreck.

Thank you SO much for your hot, hot story! And while a continuation would be welcomed, what you've written is simply superb all on its own.

xx

Simply delicious! I want a pool now in a bad way.

bi_cathy I loverd your story,the way you workd up so slow and sexy. Oh just the tension of the build up got me wet. If this is just a taste os your writing then I can't wait for more of your stories!!!

This is one of the most beautifully crafted pieces of writing I have ever read. The anticipation of where their flirting would lead, had my heart racing and my knees and thighs flexing tightly.

I challenge anybody to resist touching themselves while reading this gem.

I failed miserably.

What a wonderful depiction of flirtation and desire. So beautifully told and detailed.

You've written a story which I will return to again and again. Thank you.

That was amazingly well written. I'm as impressed as I am turned on. Please continue <3

This is my new favorite on here...Love stories of seduction and the chase...

Please write the continuation soon ... don't make me wait ... please ... more, more, more ...

I loved the building of anticipation in your story. The teasing, the come-backs. Please continue on for I'm certainly looking forward to reading more!

That was incredibly hot. More please!

that sensual seduction is soooo hot

can't wait for more :)

I am glistening and covered with goosebumps from reading this, and, um, I had to take a few "rest" breaks. I often joke that my stories take a long time to write because I need frequent breaks, and I can't imagine what it took to type this up.

Unlike some of your other readers, I don't necessarily think you need another chapter. The seduction was breathtaking, delicious, and the sex part can be left to the imagination.

This kind of story is greatly underrated; one of the most effective stories I've read, it doesn't need any continuation. Perfect as it is.

What an incrdibly sensuous story, and blilliantly written too. Very very hot!

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I-I'm speechless that story was fantastic! It didnt need the sex for it to be erotic. I lived it just the way it was! It would be cold if you did a second story though!

Ahahahahahaa!! XD You've had me laughing so hard, many times, and it's just pure genius the sexual innuendo flying around with the scrabble, chicken, and burgers. *laughs* I can feel the energy in the air, and this is gonna self-combust it's so good. You've paired together a VERY erotic couple, amazing job. To drool for. ^^

Wow. I can't believe how great this story is. But why haven't you written any more? I would love a continuation, BUT anything else from you would be great. You have such an amazing talent for writing, I can only imagine what devilish stories you have trapped in your mind! Share them, please!

I'm so wet! This story was amazing I can't stop rubbing my pussy!

Please write more. Seriously, I'm begging you. More. Pretty please?

AMAZING!

PLEASE continue!

this is lovely,with teasing and action your story has no dull moments actually it left me grinning yet i`m begging you not to left us hanging and waiting in vain for the continuation....keep writing PLEASE..Cinder

Please continue don't leave it like that I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!

This approaches perfection. If it was done as a film, I'd score it with 'Bolero' playing softly in the background, so subtle was the building heat. Of course, I'd have liked more, but really, the ending was probably perfect, too. What a gift you have!

Loved it! You do have a gift. You must continue writing!!!

Don't stop here!!

You are way too good, I love your stories

The pursuit is playful, teasing at perilous, and mmmm. Whatever scene unfold in the restroom is unnecessary compared with this story.

This story grabbed my cock, made it super hard, and wouldn't let it go. I love Lesbian sex stories and the bi women who can't go straight anymore.

I suspect (yes "suspect" is the right word in my case) I am a bi guy who is too shy, and probably too picky also, to do anything about it. so I well understood and empathized with the heroine of this story.

More pretty please.

You did it again. It seems that you like to bring it right to the edge, so close to falling, then stop. I can only imagine.....

dont just stop here love,please.. have mercy

I've never been that close to an orgasm for that long of a time. You have a very special gift!!

PLEASE!!

This proves how good you are at writing about being bad! Your stories are beautifully crafted and as well written as any I have read on this site. Definite 5 star material.

Why have you left it there

you can't possibly think that ending the story there is an accomplishment. It needs to be finished. We love the characters, let's find out what happens with them

That's what they call people like you. A Fucking Tease!!! And your so good at it. lol Good Job

I loved the flow from initial uncertainty, the ambiguous flags along the way to rapprochement.

Ignore the calls for Hollywood endings - the story is complete as it is.

Thank you.

Wow! The teasing, the passion, the slow seduction...this was a sweet sweet piece, thank you!

I loved the carnal hunt that developed between them both. Beautifully written.

You need to write More. This is a perfect start to a Great story.

Are you writing more??

Such a tease. .lol

...and talent to write the best erotica that I have read. My god it is so hot. I envy your lover. More please.

the title says it all.

Wow - that was one of the most arousing build up I ever read. And I've read a lot! Would love this to be a chapter in a novel with lots of chapter before and after this one. Keep at it! On to check the rest of your writing.

It ended so abruptly. I wanted more.

Why blather on? Excellent teasing, well-written, without the "usual" crudity or vulgarity....that would have just dissolved the environment you so carefully set up from the beginning.

It stands well all alone....the "abrupt" ending simply leaves the rest up to the reader. If someone LIKES this style, they don't necessarily have to have the rest of the story spelled out.

Outstanding.

I just...wow. This was a masterclass in seduction

I agree WOW a master piece of seduction . please tells us more

A stream of consciousness.

Like in the novel: What Maisie knew by Henry J.

Would he write this way, living today?

Greetings from Germany

Sorry nothing else but WOW!! What a tour de force!

I Can't wait for the other piece to drop...hope it will drop soon

You have clearly figured out that, whilst others go on about breasts and pussies, the single most important sex organ is the human mind.

Thank you for letting us visit yours..,

Very seductive ;->

Very very erotic! A real passionate connection cunningly portrayed. Fabulous!

I love the building of the sensual tension like a slow boil. Amazing story!

Super sexy - Love the dance.

Hot as hell.

A long, LONG six months.

A deliciously sensual and erotic dance.

Bravo!!! Masterful writing

impressive visualisation of scrabble.

OMG So Hot!!

My cousin’s wife and my wife have had a tease like that going on for years (no word games or texting evidence) but we haven’t seen them often enough so it stayed a tease. Now we have a vacation spot near theirs so who knows. Great story tho

Beautifully controlled. Great writing. Sexy as…