All Comments on 'Jack and Jill'

I imagine young sexy well-built Jack with a spray of sexy chest hair for that manly muscular chest. How about it?

Good stroke story!

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Another great one, Tex, thank you!

Cheers

SAGE

*****That was a fun read with hot sex. Story well told with a opening for a part 2? Thanks for sharing.

Wowser!!!! Is there more …. With the 4 of them?

A very fun tale. Thanks for writing

"Please sir, I want more."

Loved the story and how it kept you looking for more, like Katy!

Why do you not put the Y on the end of every

Me thinks Jack had Cougars in his truck and didn't know it. Fun nudie story.

Enjoyed the story. Moved nicely along.

Would like to see a follow up with Katy.

Good story until the end, which fell off a cliff. Could have been twice as long. Was going great until Julia got there and then sort of petered out. Lacked stamina, like Jack... Expected more details with Julia. Then would have expected the story to pick up back at Jill's and Julia's town and adventures with Katy.

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The last paragraph drove me nuts. How can you leave out half the story? What was there was great, but I was looking forward to Katy. Oh well, my imagination will have to work harder.