All Comments on 'Jackie and Jill'in it'

Unbelievably sexy heart-warming story. I'm not sure a Chapter II is possible.

Cunnilingusforever

A gem of a story like this turns up well done .I also do not think a sequel or another chapter is needed.

...with very few changes to it: "Cum drops keep fallin' on my head, but that dosn't mean that..." & there's more to it but who really gives a damn! (It was a song by B.J.Thomas...)

this story shud definitely b one of the top ten in literotica,hats off to manyfeathers

this story shud definitely b one of the top ten in literotica,hats off to manyfeathers

Amazing...truly amazing

I would have never left this situation

Wow!!! What kinda situation it is?

Almost everyone wud b luv to get into shoes of this FAMILY.

Very nice ending...especially on that note. Definately a new favorite of mine now.

His running commentary during their first time watching the porno together had me laughing my ass off! Great work!

Thanks for writing!

grat from start to finsh keepup your good wrok yours leannxx

Many Feathers..you are a fantastic author. Great story line and well written.

Made me hot and horney just thinming about a threesome I once had. Enjoyed ever minute of it as I did this story

I also enjoyed every minute of this. But not for the threesome. I enjoyed it for the last of a family coming together who only had each other left. Jill and Brian being there for one another was almost unavoidable. Similar appearance, age, recent disaster in the family for both of them, both with money problems and relationship difficulties. They played together as children, confided in one another and when they eventually got all the 'family' crap out of the way became the lovers they should have always been. Aunt Jackie needed him and she needed to not disapprove and lose the love of both her daughter and nephew. The sex in this story is a bonus on top of the love that is there.

This author is sorely missed! Bravo.

Fantastic Story

I adore this style of writing where the intimacy and love of relationships is the theme. This story built beautifully and was sensual and sensuous all the way through. I followed with bated breath each little nuance of the relationships. And, as it was clear that the arrangement would not last forever, the author manged to bring it to a "clean" end

Your writing is good. Very good. However, you just ruin the endings by not giving a HEA

Depending on the state it may be perfectly fine for cousins to sleep together or even marry. It is in half the US states.

Thank you for a gloriously delicious story!