All Comments on 'Jacob Ch. 01: the Dominant Couple'

my god what a hot story , id love to find a dom couple to use me, own me

Jacob is fast becoming Paul and Denise’s fucktoy. Looking forward to their plans for him.

I wish my wife was like Denise. Because this kind of threesome would be incredible!!!

I kinda want to see Sasha get involved in the story some more, since she’s the only one of Jacob’s friends still in town

Very Awesome story line !

Many more please !

Love the story -- more please!!!!!!

such a great story, and a 5 star author. you are amazing

Not sure why this is in gay male. Way too much pussy. Yuck!

I love it. I’ve written stories on Lit and read them all the time. I’m so impressed with how prolific you are and how arousing your stories are. You definitely have some throughlines and common themes across your stories but they always fire up my libido. Very good with building relationships and depicting character headspace. Can’t wait for part 2.

Good story, but you badly need an editor to sort out the missed words, improper tense, etc.

One of the best stories on here. Hot and depraved.

Need a sequel!

Oh my, what a hot naughty story. Well written too. Loved when she fed him the cream pie by straddling his face… that’s soo hot!