All Comments on 'Jamie - The Journey Begins Ch. 01'

Great start! Can't wait to see how it continues

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Appreciate your comments, there are a few chapters in the works so hope to post up soon, thanks again. John

Good to see you posting these stories. :-)

Thank you JasonClearwater, appreciate your kind words 😆

Wow great story

Thank's Fantasy1995, glad you enjoyed it. Hope you have an awesome day

I'm afraid I came into the game late. (Started with last chapter posted and now have dropped back to fill in the pieces.) Great writing, Hutch. I especially love the 'mom' touch in this. Every young fire-fighter needs a mum like his, right?

Pleasantly surprised by the style and flow. Really nice start. I'll be reading onward and upward.

I seriously just happened upon this one by pure coincidences, totally worth the read so far, it’s vibrant, the characters seem solid and the convos between James and his friends are funny to read ha I love it great story.

Thank you for your recent comments on my story. Always a pleasure to receive a good word from a fellow writer. I really enjoyed the flow and camaraderie of this one and will be sure to read more in future.

Thank you, appreciate your kind feedback, hope you enjoy.