All Comments on 'Jane is Trained to Submit Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Easier to train a dog.

This has gotten silly and boring

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07about 9 years agoAuthor
More excitement

As with most of my stories, this one gets more intense as it goes along. Not very dark, like some, but hopefully exciting, so keep with it,.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 9 years ago
8" stiletto heels? Are you trying to break her fucking ankle you halfwit?

Not to mention the blisters she's going to endure. A poor as fuck factory tat should never have made it out the cesspool you call a brain.

greens444greens44410 months ago

I am very late to this story. Not sure what the BS is. This is fantasy, if you don’t like the fantasy don’t read it.

I am enjoying it.

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