All Comments on 'Jane is Trained to Submit Ch. 09'

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimabout 9 years ago
The best yet

Genuine tension in this one as to who would have her. Loved it

post_masturbatory_shamelordpost_masturbatory_shamelordabout 9 years ago
Nice

Enjoyed the story, but wish she would have been really lost in the card game. Bob seems to not be willing to really use her as a slave.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

the previous comment obviously contains a "typo"

use = abuse.

thankfully bob in the story is able to differentiate them

unlike the writer of the previous post

.....

wonderfuly written story , delightful plot

engaging & interesting characters ..

truly worthy of 5 stars

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