All Comments on 'Jane Marwood, Governess Ch. 01'

Amazingly written! please continue with the story.

I enjoyed it very much, but i wished it was a bit longer though. Looking forward to part two!

I love your mind. G xx

I enjoyed this story immensley and hope you will continue it soon.

More-More-More. Great start to what I hope will be an epic series. Thank you for posting.

oldog

Thank you for writing for Literotica and for sharing an obvious talent with us, Miss Marwood. This was a marvellous first offering and I can hardly wait for Chapter 2.

Five stars, welcome and much more, please!

love it! can't wait for the rest.

I love stories like this one and I always identify with the shy, punished young man.

You have began a marvelous tale and I will await future installments with anxious,

keen anticipation. Thank you.

Many young men these days would benefit from proper discipline. Bad behavior should not be tolerated.

Very good story,well told with a good writing style.Also very sexy too.He wasn't the only one with an erection!!

I was just wondering.I've read stories in the past posted by Jane Marwood on other sites.Was Jane Marwood an alias for Harriot Marwood?It really doesn't matter as all the stories by both are really put together well and I've enjoyed them all!! My only hope is they all show up on this site because they are all GREAT.ThankYou

Well done!

Wonderful story darling, and so naughty of you to tease us with such a cliff hanger ending. I wait chapter two with barely disguised anticipation. Erotically charged, wonderfully sculpted, a fantastic read.

Question: if she promised him 10 strokes of the cane, why did she stop at 5? Wouldn't that undermine her authority, to promise punishment and not deliver it?

Oooooohhhh... for the remaining 5 she could've caned his thighs, so sensitive, so smooth. The actinic-bright needles of pain, sharp strong savage sensation, branding his memory forever, oh yessssss.

loved reading it. :)

Well, at least she showed a little bit of thought before she could land the next five cane strokes. Unfortunately, she did not give him the next five since she said that she would. Now, a dom will be able to read their sub to find out where the sub's limits would be. She did that but kind of undermined her authority. Yeah, it would have been very hard on him but he had to learn her authority. Will he get dinner that night?

Miss Marwood, I've been bad too