All Comments on 'Jealousy'

Its very erotic and sexy. Keep it up.

Having read both your storys I think you should keep writing.

I loved the twists and turns.

I feel the twins are good for more kinky stories / chapters

I have never considered combining the incest, TS, and lesbian genres. Very cleaverly done. But more significantly... HOT HOT HOT. More please...

Dude your theme was great, but the way you went about the plot was fucking idiotic. You could have written it much better, maybe developed the characters a bit more.

understanding that this is, as you stated, your first submission, it is obvious you have learned an enormous amount since then. Keep writing. You are blazing paths that make you the king of this hill.

I'm developing a dyke-crush on you. Ive got this gantasy of you and we fuck like rabbits. All my life it's been girls for me, never was attracted to guys, but the concept of seducing a gougrous girl that turns out to have a cock has become an intense fantasy. So much so that I've been talking to my girlfriend about a threesome. We've shared others before but never even considered this.

Thank you for expanding my fantasies, and helping me open up my sexuality.

You're a wonderful writer. I finished the entire Sultana series is one binge-reading session and am now reading everything you've written. Love your mind. Wanna just mesh brains together and fuck like crazy. ;-}

Love ya.

I enjoyed this immensely. Please tell me there is a Christmas chapter in the works!

I'm sorry there was no 2nd story. I see all kind of ways this story could go.

Beautiful hotness!

Zoe's husband can't see it's not his wife body ?

Zoe and Thurina are perfectly identical ? They move the same way, kiss the same way, their pussies look exactly the same ?

Oh my... This made my balls melt and boil. Your transgender characters are how they should be, atleast in fantasy, they're gender with something swapped. Since they're women with penises even straight guys can enjoy them. I think we enjoy them the most. I read that penis is not sexually repulsive to straight guys its the masculine traits. I guess a woman cumming like us is even hotter in fantasy because its relatable.

I am glad that an amiable solution was found, through discussion, although I admit I would not have been so quick to forgive in Zoe's place.