All Comments on 'Jean - The Birth of Venus Ch. 16'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Please stop

You are addicted to you characters JK Rowling but it’s okay to admit their story has ended. Inside you too know that the story has been over for chapters but you can’t imagine your life without writing for them can you. Just know it’s okay to start something new because there is nothing new left to create here in this story. Harry beat the bad guy and it safe for you to put them to sleep. Or in this case since I only read the first and last paragraphs, let Jean wake up From this nightmare or simply and honorably die at the end of that chain. It’s time.

Masterfuljim over 4 years ago

Gotta say

I’m surprised she didn’t jump off the cliff voluntarily. What a fucked up family.

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