All Comments on 'Jeff Tait Ch. 01'

You seemed to get off track, an Asian slut but only a small part of the story was about that, what happened?

Good Story can't wait to see where everything goe's from here. it would be Nice to See Jimmy&Daniel get their's.

as well as his Ex and New Hubby.

Well..I guess the "years" 9172 - 9834 you get what i mean yeah? right so..the minute i seen that, i stopped reading.

Maybe you should actually introduce the character Andrew before having him walk out with Brian?

With his name being used it indicated that Jeff knew who he was, but there had been no mention of him until that point.

Just a line or two would have made the difference.

Reads like bullet points rather than a story