All Comments on 'Jen Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
STOP!!!!

Please don't punish us further. Stop at Ch. 01.

This is by far the worst story I have read on here in a very very long time!

STOP..DO NOT CONTINUE!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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I'm sorry.... but what is this sentence?

"Unlike you not to take advantage and you might as well, my parents will."

Doesn't make any sense whatsoever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I want...

chapter 2 please

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

More

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07over 12 years agoAuthor
Talking heads

"Unlike you not to take advantage and you might as well, my parents will."

With a hangover she wasn't likely to make a perfectly clear speach - "It's unlike you not to take advantage of a situation uncle! You might as well shout at me, becuase my parents will when I get home, I'll be in real trouble then," she spoke fluently even though she was suffering form her first hangover!

OK! Not relly it doesn't fit in withthe situation, story teller07

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

I love the characters and the build up come on chapter 2 I cannot wait :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

please continue it

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Part 2

Please continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
any chance of a part 2

please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
what?! were is the rest of the story! please come back and write for us. please

this is the best story. it has all the build up for uncle and niece coming together. i would love to see them living together and niece learning in full just who and what she is while loving and seriving her sir. sir needs his niece just as badly.

HotForLitHotForLitover 5 years ago
So HOT!!

Please take this one further

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Would like to see this series continue

Please keep writing this series, and everything else I just live your writing it is one of the best on literotica

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