All Comments on 'Jen: Route 66 Kicks-St. Louis'

Nice subject but poorly written and poorly edited. Less detailed narrative and more dialog might help.

Great bit of nostalgia (sp) but some details spoil the effect. For example the trucker gives her his cell phone number in the early 60's, I think not. Otherwise a fun read at the least.

Just remember your time frame for telling. No cell phones or huge sleepers were around in the 60's. Nice job on the rest, though!

Uh, Yeah, there were sleepers, both integrated and the separate unit as early as the 1930s. Most were single wide thirty-six inches, some were double wide, and a few were custom .Not a lot had changed by the 1960s with the possible exception of custom sleepers. Most would not have been elaborate as those of today, but a custom job in the 60s is not out of the realm of possibility. Take a look at www.hankstruckpictures.lcom

The other comments were spot on. Also, I don't know why this was in the 'group sex' category.

Another enjoyable chapter from the saga of Jen fucking and sucking her way across the USA via Route 66. The historical and geographical details continue to fascinate me as does the hot sex but the 'cell phone' slip up was rather distracting so greater care in proof-reading please! Thanks, all in all, an entertaining read! Pete.

A cell phone # in 1963

You have a historical inaccuracy in your story.

It states "Bubba said he had to get moving if he was going to stay on schedule and I wanted to hit the road as well. Bubba gave me his cell phone number in case I ever wanted another ride on his thirteen inch pole and I climbed down to the tarmac." 1961 is the time frame of this adventure correct? I would contend that no trucker had a cell phone.