All Comments on 'Jennie's "Nightmare" Ch. 02'

Terrific story with plenty of potential. Don't stop now. Just curious, though. What brought about Jenny's new openness?

Dream on! Rosa's going to love these two, and I'm wondering if Jenny's going to reward Greg with young Mindy, too?

Another 5 by Joe!!! Soon it will be just you on the Top stories list!!

another great story!

really hot stuff

Very well written story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

nice story, really nice. good built up and all. just a bit too much of the "i love you darling".

still, very hot, well done, looking forward to the next installment.

Nice story, but don't try this at home, folks- without extra lubrication Jennie would be bleeding after that. And probably sore for days.

More lube=more fun for everyone.

Trust me ;)

lets see them get with the girls and bbysitter!!!

Inept and stupid. 1 star!

Good story. I think its a serious shame when someone bad mouths another author and does it continually without being man enough to sign their comments. This moronic and childish commentator has posted that he is going to score all your stories with a "1" and bad mouth you. I don't normally wish harm to anyone but I believe the world and gene pool would be better off if he just stopped breathing. Keep up the stories and please ignore this individual.

Need to check the difference between peak and peek.

It would have been a great opportunity to have Mindy enter the story. Not actively, but rather first listening, then watching from the doorway.

Still a very good build up and excellent story.

Jason

Very good story. The sex scenes do not stifle creative exchanges between characters. I really enjoy this type of creative fiction.

I hope you are putting a thick bush on one of these free thinking women.

overwritten

Too much emphasis is put on the "homosexuality" aspect of other people. Normal people don't go around labeling others in such a way and homosexuality is not the derogatory crap it is written as in this story. Certainly you have the disgusting feminazi types who push their "gay pride" on society, forcing it to be taught to unwilling children in schools, but that only seems to be relevant of the one lipstick lez characters.

Sad that they have a difficult time enjoying each other as a couple without including others and breaking their vows.

Sorry dude, I know it's a bummer to find out your wife is a total skank and has no idea what commitment actually means.