All Comments on 'Jennifer's Story: Maid for Poker'

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hrnicholhrnicholover 13 years ago
What's the point

At this point the story has no coherence--other than Paul's sadistic dominance of Jennifer. There is no foundation established. This seems to be a scene from another story where there is an actual story-line.

Couldn't score very high as the cohesiveness of an actual story was not present.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Huh?

?????

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More, please!!!

Awesome!!

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