All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 02'

I thought this was absolutely wonderful! So much suspense and enough detail to really set this narrative alight. Well done!

Finally she gets it right!!

Great writing, Zen. :)

azulie

The suspense really held me. This is a really good story. Thanks.

You are a wonderful writer, please keep going. I loves all your stories, and I am glad you sent me here, you have posted many more stories here than lush. :).

I very much liked that the risk was his instead of hers. If caught, she might be embarrassed but not ruined among these strangers. While he appears to be in a place of power in this company, HE is the one facing fallout if their tryst is discovered. Refreshing. I didn't like how far he pushed in chapter one. It was an abuse of trust, not a test of trust. If he wants to risk his own reputation, fine by me.

That was so fucking hot! I’m dripping.