All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 08'

and everything else. You certainly can write a good, engaging story. Keep up this fine work you do

and nice people... You really should put the five stories together and try to sell it to a publisher... I enjoyed the first version and the second.... Thank you, Coaster

For another of your great stories

Yes, another great story. I also really like the "shared universe." I previously read Ingrid and will read "The Maturation of Vinnie" next. Are there others? I bet you could write a good story featuring the young private investigator Peter.

for something to happen

the comments you receive from some who seem to have little ability to offer true criticism but instead seem to be driven by some personal anger.

I've enjoyed your writings. I'm rereading most for a second time.

Thank you.

gentle story.

I don't usually have much patience with those who bitch about where you end your stories, but I would love to see Tom and his parents learning about the pregnancy!

I also would like to see more on other stories you have written. several of these stories need at least another chapter feels like having our butts in the wind.

Again I read a wonderfully written story, this time not deceit but just a warm and lovely tale of two young people finding true love story with a warm and loving family. Just enough drama to keep it interesting and with the different characters it was a very enjoyable read. The one thing I was happy with was to see was the continuance and assumed happily ever after of the story of Steve and Ingrid which was quite delightful. The only thing of that this story and Ingrid should have been linked somehow. The only disappointment that Coaster2 hasn't written any more stories here since 2017. A a fan of his stories I wish he would write more as I soon will have read them all. Well Done Coaster2 5+ stars

superb,thanks again

Well Done!! Thank you

Good story but needed an ending .