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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Constructive criticism

Good work

Get a good build up story going though. Maybe he had a failing marriage and erotica was his only escape

bellesveritesbellesveritesabout 7 years ago

Ohhhhh my. I rarely ever comment, but I just have to say this story is the best I have read in a long time. I love the realistic feel, not everything is over the top, and they know they can't fuck like that every day. That realism adds to the depth of the story for me. Everyone has their own little kinky desires and this just hit all of my targets tonight. I love variety. This is what I need right this moment. Tomorrow could be something completely different, but tonight I feel like Jessica. I want it so much I ache. That means you did a damn good job.

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