All Comments on 'Jessica The Pissmop Ch. 02'

Hi there,

I really did like the start of this part, really got me going with having busted the "friend" of you into that situation... and the movie he showed you of me... interesting.

:-)

I also liked the rest, although not as much as the start... guess it was just a bit too much running around trying to catch the piss...if you know what I mean?

But keep it def up! Because I still love the stories you write!

nice style...

id have to guess your refering to max hardcore, and also casting your main male character as Steve Sweet?

Excellently nasty. And factor in the rich-bitch element, you've got a real winner. But, like, where are the dogs? Good work.

it is not good story. There is no drama, no words, everything is too trite