All Comments on 'Jezebel's Tale Ch. 10'

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Darkstar93Darkstar93over 10 years ago
Felt sort of short

Kind of bish bash bosh job done, very anti climatic I suppose.

You had all the build up then a not very impressive fight to be honest and suddenly everything is over and she is arch angel. Felt rushed.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Ah yes, there is an verry importand hirarchie how things must be done to keep and reytore order and it must be done in an exact way. Yes, it must be done right. So now we know everything importand and do it, wow that was easy done right. So Nezabel nhst got the arch angelic power, how nice and now all is good. Yey dont need to bother to read anybing further, i got the story and the joke, yes it was great thank you

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