All Comments on 'Jezebel's Tale Ch. 17'

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VladimirNogairVladimirNogairabout 10 years ago
One of the best stories I have read

I have been looking all over for a story that has aspects of poly and bisexuality. I am also a major fan of super or extra human abilities. This story is an exquisite mix. With lovable believable powers and progressions.

I just love this story so much thank you for writing it :)

PurplefizzPurplefizzover 1 year ago

Yes, the grammatical issues are a pain, plus, yes, the continuity of the story gets a bit boggled at times, where things that should be difficult and stressful just seem to happen and are passed by. But the Author has already stated this was one of the very first series they ever wrote, it is a learning process. I’m trying to ignore the errata and focus on the creative ideas and the execution of said ideas into story.

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