All Comments on 'Jill & Dan Meet Larry & Kim'

The story was great but the writing needs to be cleaned up so that it says what you mean.

this is a very good, Still can't believe dan can not have anythoughts that his wife is cheating...maybe if the thought of it crossed his mind a couple of tines this would be more real. I know when he dose find out though there will be hell to pay for Jill and Larry.

this is a very good, Still can't believe dan can not have anythoughts that his wife is cheating...maybe if the thought of it crossed his mind a couple of tines this would be more real. I know when he dose find out though there will be hell to pay for Jill and Larry.

how about kim is out for revenge also since she found out larry has been with jill also and now she has a long time competitor.... she tells dan.... who does A.... takes revenge on both by waiting till they get way out to sea and waking them up in the middle of the night and the boat is sinking.... toss larry and jill out forget to throw the life jackets out with them and drive off into the sunset leaving them to sink swim or maybe both to get fucked by sharks..... or B ...... gets larry off the boat and cant find him the next day and also forgets to throw him a life jacket ,, takes jill back home to be his slave from now on ,,, never to leave his presence again without a chastity belt on ... or he sells her ass to the highest bidder and turns her into a prostitute for him to get revenge on ... uses her to fuck with a 15 inch dildo since she likes them big and he never fucks anything but her ass from now on many possibilities of things to do to her ,,, he could even end up with kim which would be the final revenge as then he gets the best of everything ... rid of a cheating wife a nothing best friend and a very pretty girl who loves him for him might even be someone else

many possibilities to screw the screwers /.......go get them dan

"Turn around is fair play", except being played on the High Seas.

He must have rich parents. Anyone that dumb couldn't make enough money to buy a 40 footer unless he was a pro football player.