by damonX
...but spoilt slightly by the odd spelling error, most notably, "Jill's curiosity was peaked". The word is "piqued".
But I still gave you four stars.
I think people who write about spelling errors in porn stories are tardos. That's retartd for the last person who commented.
The title say all. Great writing and I gave you five gold stars. More to come about Jill ?
Thanks for more than one page, I really like it when you authors spread out the LUST! It just makes the story so much hotter!!! The anal side is a nice touch too!!