All Comments on 'Jim Sees Dead People! Ch. 02'

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OzkiwiOzkiwiover 10 years ago
Interesting.

More than interesting enough for me to want the next instalment.

dinkymacdinkymacover 10 years ago
Nice!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
cool.

can't wait for the next.

CsharpeCsharpeover 10 years ago
Great start of a series

Can't wait for the next installment

cylinderlitcylinderlitover 10 years ago
Awesome

Hope it continues

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Iight energy?

Where did that come from?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wow!

What a start! Too Awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What? You spent about 1/10 of the time on this you should have

There was no real explanation, no build up. It was over before anyone had a chance to understand what the fuck was going on.

Put some effort into what you are doing, or don't bother. This chapter felt like you expended the minimum effort needed to create a chapter.

Take some pride in what you do.

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