Jim Sees Dead People! Ch. 09-10

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Magicwrtr
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She made my intense stimulation with the third and fourth oral orgasm I gave her look like incompetent play as she brought me quickly to ecstasy and using her dark energy held me there for a long time. I think I passed out for a while after she sucked my balls completely dry, her core sucking up my seed greedily. Gasping and out of breath she looked down at me with a proud smirk as she lowered her torso against me to claim a kiss.

A short time later I told her I loved her, when she looked at me in disbelief I offered proof by telling her to bite me. How could I not love her, the mind blowing sex being the least of reasons compared to the rest of what she had to offer of herself to me and the others.

I remembered the feeling of hatred toward the slayers when I thought she would be hurt. I remember showing her the coven to show her how others valued her, and I realized I believed every word of it. I loved this woman without a doubt. I had no worries that the bite would go wrong and make me some unwilling slave.

We both passed out after the bite, the orgasm so explosive for both of us we woke up a few minutes later completely sated. This time when I told her I loved her, when I looked at her adoringly and not like an addict, she believed me.

Chapter 10 -- Children / Epilogue.

Over the next 8 months we spent most of our time at Stephanie's place. Finally as a group we moved in. Mia, Pia, Marie, Nikki and I all had separate rooms, but most nights we all piled in with Stephanie and slept together, using the other rooms only when we wanted intimate one on one time. Although Pia, Marie and Nikki didn't really sleep they stayed with us for the most part.

Although they always teased me saying that they snuck off and had really hot three-way Sapphic love when the rest of us were sleeping. They would just wink though with a twinkle in their eyes when I said, "Pictures or it didn't happen." Of course cameras couldn't capture ghosts or angels so I couldn't even set anything up to find out. Not that I would ever do such a thing...

Plus we were all having too much fun with it for me to really try and prove it either way. I was almost sure they did it to kick my libido to a higher gear. Whenever they would go on about one of their nights I would lure one away and thoroughly ravish them. I hoped both were true though of course, and I never did find out.

Nikki gave birth first. To my son Wade, named after his grandfather. He had the blonde hair and storm gray eyes of his mother, but had my nose and chin. He was an adorable baby. To my regret at the necessity, I bound his power with mine, trapping it beneath a shield to hide his identity from angels. There were also more practical reasons to do so.

We couldn't have a toddler throwing around light energy without understanding the consequences. There were also the eighteen vampire aunts and one uncle that he could easily fry on accident. So it was necessary. I had also screened the birth room so the Angel's would not feel his power enter the world.

The birth was quick, maybe 15 minutes, because Nikki was an angel with total control over her body it didn't even hurt her. Mia was happy and disgusted at the same time, knowing her time would be much more painful.

To her surprise however I was able to use my energy to abate some of the pain when my daughter Mina decided to make her big entrance two days later. Not to say it was painless, but it wasn't quite that bad for her.

Mina had Mia's Raven hair but her eyes were bluish green. Her Asian features were dulled by my European looks, she was adorable. What surprised us all was when she started crying, we could hear her voice in our ears but also directly in our minds. Apparently my energy during her conception made her a little special, we wouldn't find out how much for some time.

It wasn't all puppies and rainbows but we are generally happy. Mia and I were able to finish college and she opened up a practice right in town. What did I do besides keep my family happy, satisfied, protected and safe? I became a writer, it kept me at home and available to my family, which of course is the most important thing. I know ironic, me hating the English Lit class and all.

Did the angels ever cotton on to my son Wade being a Nephilim? Was my Nikki ever punished for her part in things? Was he as strong as we feared? What powers did my daughter Mina have?

Well, that is my children's story to pass along when they are ready to tell it.

As for our little group we settled in and made the town ours to protect and hold. The smart demons, necromancers and evil vamps gave our town a wide berth, allowing it to stand as a sanctuary. The stupid ones died quickly and painfully.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
more

i so hope you write more as i cant wait to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
complaints compliments

enjoyed YOUR story keep going

anon instead of whining write your on story and make it like you want.

bitching is easier than doing

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Final Thoughts

Agreed with Anonymous 1, and lmao at the user asking this to be made into a book, omg... You had a story with great potential and basically ruined it, which is a shame since you obviously have the talent to have written it better. You seem to do ok at the start but struggle on the follow through, and don't even get me started on the sad attempt at a sequel, ugh... There wasn't enough drama and challenges for the characters, not enough time developing and learning his powers or knowing more about the others, barely anything on Stephanie who would've added a lot more to future chapters but we got like 2 pages of actual content with her romantically. Basically you're missing way too much for this to be a successful story in the end though it had all the makings of being one, you just didn't follow through on it. The story wasn't long enough, no sequel worth mentioning (we needed more content for Jim and the others, not just fucking, and you seem bored with the story like in some of your others because you ended this one sloppily and quickly switched to the children in the joke of a sequel). Story potential: 5 star all day, written result: meh, maybe a 3 star at best, such a shame. P.S. on a personal peeve note, overuse of "honey pot" made me facepalm several times, you seem obsessed with the term though to each their own I suppose. That one while slightly annoying to me, didn't factor into my rating of the story, I could still enjoy the read despite it but the other negatives outweighed the positives. You have talent but you still need work, my favorite story of yours was Flame of Cytheria :) Anyway sorry for the long rant that was fairly negative, I know you probably don't like hearing it but just saying it how I see it as a reader and fan of good stories. Instead of taking this negatively I honestly hope you can take this and learn from it to write better in the future, I just try to be an honest person and not sugarcoat my words. I didn't hate the story, I just hated what it was missing, what it could've been which is why I bothered ranting at all, believe it or not I don't comment that often so it's saying something I took the time to here. Anyway keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Continuation?

What do you think about doing a continuation of this after you finish your current work in progress?

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 9 years ago
Damn Fine!

After reading Jezebel's Tale and this one, I have to say I like this one more. An open ending with this one, but more satisfying.

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