All Comments on 'Jimmy T’s Family: Bk. 01: Mom'

Keep this one going . Great story and poeople

It would be something to have Jimmy turn his mother into an exbihitionist......just waiting til the next part.

Something differentand very tasty. Keep their adventures cumming. I enjoyed it very much.

Wonderfully stated seduction story, carefully edited.

It is sadi well begun is half done. No. Dont stop. Carry on with this story, with Chris' relatonship with hissis, etc. I loved the story. Well written.

i gave you a 5er. good job as usual. you are too skilled for ordinary comment, so i just, as an old newspaper man once said about someone else, rolled the pencils into the drawer and sat back for a good read.

A good slow build up with plenty of background information to make the characters seem very real.

Five stars all the way through.

I do hope that you continue with this series, it has so many ways it could go with the side stories that could pop up in the author's creative mind.

Thanks for the great read.

Female cousin, aunt, mother, whatever. The only way to not resent him is to have him doing something similar. Perhaps even another daughter from his first time in Australia. More women less men. Keep going.

I see you about to take us on another of your wonderful adventures, and I'm glad to be on it.

Don't wait too long for Bk. 02, please!

Your writing style was spectacular. It went at the perfect pace, not rushing into the sex, but easing into it quite nicely. Very well written, and very much appreciated.

im glad you finally got another story up. it was good cant wait til there are more chapters! i dont know what happened to those two stories you were working on but i hope they still coming. anyway have fun jim and dont work to hard. =)

always enjoyed your story telling.Thanks for the new story and please give us more.

Another good scouries story. Definitely wanting to read more in this series. Somehow, I am betting Jimmy has more family down under.

very nice story, but i want to know that in real life u want to fuck ur mother pls give ur views on this mail id-

sweetsex85@gmail.com

it was a excellent story and i very much enjoyed it good job and keep it up

Please do write the other chapter as I really want to know his other adventures.

This is definitely up there with '"Ooooh Mommy," I groaned.' I wonder if the author deliberately selected his previous best-ever (in my opinion) story for some iniquitous reason.

This story has all the ingredients to become a classic and should be continued. To waste this initial plot and these characters would be a crime against literature.

5/5

Great story, erotic at least...........

Keep it up and write more on this family.

Wow! You sure write an interesting story. I have read most of your writings on lit. and am always amazed at your writing abilities. Man this was a great start on the series and I caan't wait for next book/chapter. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Wow, talk about an easily pleased bunch of reviewers. Nothing more than badly written, boring teenage jerkoff story. Don't quit your day job, if you're even out of high school yet.

Man, this story was fun. It felt a little rushed at times, but it was an entertaining read. I'm looking forward to read the next book in the adventures of these characters. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

waiting for book 2

I am waiting for the part 2 make it has early has possible

Well written and thought out. Can't wait for book 2.

I just liked it. Easy to read - good visualization - pleasant read no matter what anonymous says.

Hello Scouries, a lovely well balanced story. Being their ages and giving into their lustful desires, I wonder the chances of her getting preg!

This is a really well balanced tale because of the backstory which was thoughtfully put together without an excess of words. I could definitely look forward to you presenting further stories about Jimmy T and his Family. You know, it did occur to me that the "little on the side" Jimmy thinks his dad must be getting while in Australia just might be from another family member living in Australia. That idea occurred to me while coming to the close of the story.

Great crafting either way. 5 stars!

I loved the story. I liked the storyline and the way you built the seduction. The only thing I would like more would be if you described the sex scenes slower and in more detail.

Can't wait to read more on Jimmy!

I have, for a long time, resisted registering and commenting on this site. But have pushed me over the edge. Thank you for your stories. They are most excellent!

Fiona fulfills her fantasy!

Lizzie lusts for love!

Down Under and Going Down!

This story just writes itself!

Keep up the stories, and if you need help with subtitles, let me know.

Jimmy SHOULD go to Australia - with mom's blessing (encouragement?) to discover dad's "other" family (make him a bigamist). Eventually, Jimmy and mom could get 'married' moving to another town to start over.

Even if there's no sequel, this was a great story. I hope to be reading about Jimmy T's family for a long time. I loved it.

mikelucia548@yahoo.com

Excellent! I can't wait to read more about Jimmy T's family!

There is the Australia mystery to resolve. And the tease about sis to look into (pun intended). Don't hurry the follow-up - a good story takes time to craft.

This is perhaps the second best story ever put onto Literotica.com. The unabashed manner of plugging your other story did not bother me at all. Borrowing one of your themes from a past contest winner was only a minor distraction from my enjoyment. The super-hot sex and ever so original and clever plot simply had me reading word to word with such anticipation that I did not even finish my lemonade before the story ended. I can not wait for the next submission in this astounding series of great mom love stories from Lit's best writer. A resounding big 5'er for you and a good luck in both the Lit contest and in the E.I.R. contest.

Great writing,the Aussie connection along with the sister and Dad get all of them one at a time the add one at a time to the nudist life. It really happens that way and always will.

Most excellent read! Well done indeed. Looking forward to the second chapter!

but a bit rushed concerning sister, and few unbelievable parts

IE he's in motel with HUGE erection getting painted then they just go on bike ride etc etc

i like your story and hope you keep writing it just try and make it a bit more realistic

Really enjoyed it, as I do with all of your stories. Please make this one a long, complicated story, as there are so many facets to these characters that should be explored! I agree with an earlier post, dad's "connections" in Australia need to be interesting and familial, in order to keep us happy with dad's long-timed actions. And of course you are bringing in sis! Why else would you mention her like that in the last paragraph! You are absolutely one of my favorite authors. Keep it up! (Pun intended, natch!)

but, please, pay more attention to your story line. If Mom is sixteen when she gets pregnant, she can be no more than thirty-five when this story begins (not thirty-six as said in the story), and the son is just going to turn nineteen in a few days.

& the milf moms are always mid to late thirties, Is that realistic? Dunno. But it works for me ( & them too)!

Again...i only just joined the site yesterday, but cannot bring myself to read anyone else. Awesome job! Keep it going please!

You have a gift and you never disappoint. I thoroughly enjoy your style of writing and the wit that accompanies it. You are definitely a favorite of mine. I look forward to the next installment.

Please continue this family's saga. Great story!

Chuck

more chapters please damn fine story

Please write more of their story. Which ever way you decide their story should go, that is the way it should go. This starting was your concept, please don't be too swayed by other people's opinion of the direction it should take.

Scouries I love this Saga! Please continue!

I really like this one you do need to continue this story to all its potential.

What a great story. I love reading stories like this. I think it would be great for Jimmy to screw his sister with mummy catching them and having a threesome. They could all go down under to surprise daddy and his mistress and have a great family affair

ronnie_g.

Another well written story... Can't wait for more chapters... You've left me wanting so much more... And the possibilities of couplings are racking my brain... Does dad take Lizzie down under as his assistant... Does mum take Lizzie while dad and Jimmy go away and engage in rampant sexual activities... Can't wait to find out... 6 Stars... 11 out of 10... Loved it...

i what more of the story line

Your writing is simply amazing and cannot wait to read more. Keep the great work coming.

i know the father has another family in Austria and they are twin girls months apart from jim and liz i think jim should be the father of first and second mothers child after the family trip to austria.. where jimmy finds the other family by accident and becomes their lover

Whatever direction this story goes, it will be a pleasure worth reading.

hope it keeps going just added you to my favorite author list

Its good to have you Back Writing. as for the story i think it was Awsome i loved the time and patience Jimmy showed in "cucking" dad and taking Mom to places she only fantasized about if that. would deffinately like More.

Very sneaky how you got them into that plot. Mom/son stories are by far my favorite and no writer does it better than you.

A note on repetition: The first time mom and son character pair get it on is the biggest thrill for me. Putting the same two into more stories after they have already had sex, doesn't have any where near the same huge thrill.

You have an excellent talent for incest stories.

Loved every minute of it. I'll have to wait to read the second book, but after reading only 3 of your stories so far, I find you my most favorite author. Keep up the good work.

So it would still be incest if Jimmy fucks his half-sister born just 3 months after Jimmy to his father's Australian wife, right? And of course the second child in the Australian family is a boy just 11 months younger. Where could it all lead, family orgy? Not trying to lead your story, just speculating. Loved what you wrote.

Would love to see more

Naaaaaaniaaaa Bobby !!!

Great story and well written. Thanks!

Mr. Scouries, you can really write erotica. Wish I was as good. BTW, your two stories are the first I have voted for at all.

I loved your story of Jimmy and his mother. I would loved to read more on them.

I think the imagination is more powerful than reality. just like the strength in the story telling.

The first time I read this amazing story I glossed over "Onacock" Oh, man, that's priceless. I don't know If you are writing theses type of stories anymore, but I certainly do hope so.

I usually don't read four page stories but this was different; I was nice how Jimmy was able to convince his mom to do things his way. The author wrote how one can use words to make the other person do things that they believe they thought of when, of course, they didn't. It was well written but next time I would like to see the mother take the first step.

Was almost a trip down memory lane, oh how I miss my dear Mother. And the love we shared, typical as well as unconventional for 15 years. I'm sure we'll meet again in the next life.

Great writing ,please continue with this and bring in the whole Australia idea as well.

We readers are blessed with writers with your sense and nuances.

Thanks,

A READER

Wow. Brilliantly written, made a very good read. Your writing style is extraordinary, and hands down, you're one of the best authors on this site,quite possibly on the Internet too.

Thank You

..and the dialogue is quite sophisticated. It's a shame you tend to put "Jim and I" when it ought to be "..and me", but that's fairly easy to correct. Try substituting "we" and "us" for such phrases, and see which one fits. If "us", then it ought to be "Jim and me".

I simply love this story. I liked the way you brought everything together. I did see some mistakes in your presentations. But Iḿ not an editor so I just won´t mention them. How I wish my mom had been as gullible as yours. (I was going to say stupid but I think they both mean basically the same.) If a son can influence her so easy imagine the guys at work. I don think she will ever tell her son about that and ruin what she has at home. But by her actions I don´t believe she´s only been with one other man. Just like her son holding back on his lovers I think she´s doing the same. Anyway I really think you´re watching to much porn and trying to bring it into your story. You don´t have to have the biggest cock to be a good lover. Most women will tell you that itś not the size of the boat but rather the motion of the ocean. Good writing hope to see more of it in the future.

I loved it and can not wait for your others.

I didn't care for the nudist beach shit. Or the shaved pussy. Just me...

Hi Jimmy - I am glad to read that you are getting over your illness, and starting to write again. You are a very good writer, and I enjoyed your story. The excuse of getting the paint out of his mother's cunt and asshole was wonderfully sexy. I also liked how he licked her cunt and asshole. I am glad that you didn't write about her getting pregnant. I guess it won't be long before the father fucks the daughter and the mother fucks her as well. Pretty soon the father should agree to let the son fuck the mother and sister while the father is down under, with all of them having additional fuck partners.

That was quite a hot tale! And a hot tail! 5*.

Loved the story well written and hot as hell

until you shaved her

Story about blindfolding a driver and shepherding them around the course to the finish line. It had moments of levity, ribald humour and was very hot by times, as are a great many of the authors tales. The fact that the finish line itself, was very enjoyable to the driver and the person with the map, was hot, and not necessarily a forgone conclusion. With a bit of a twist and a nipple tweak, we arrive at the end of the first chapter. An enjoyable ride for all, it would seem. Well done Sir S.

Great story of incest and the journey taken to achieve it's rewards. Very well written with great character development. This story demands to be continued in as many chapters or books necessary to complete the story and the journey for mother and son. 5+ stars for sure!

My second read of this wonderful story and it still gets me hard.

One of the most enjoyable story ever

Outstanding! Beautiful narration of the gradual and inevitable crumbling of mom's resistance, brought about by masterful manipulation by her son, seduction so subtle as to be imperceptible. Mom's personality is thoroughly adorable, her beauty magical, her sensuality irresistible, she comes across as the perfect woman who is every man's dream. I can see myself reading this story over and over

This story is brilliant! It is so funny, I laughed all the way through it. I'll be reading more of this author.

This chapter was well organized, logically deveoped and believable. The safety, security and love the mother feels knowing that her son wants to please her more than anything is beyond measure. For the son to accept his mother as a female human sexual being shows his mature. For him to realize she must/has turn off part of herself for six moths of the year is remarkable. He realizes what and how much of herself she has given up. For them to realize and accept that they can love more than one person at a time , without jealousy or their worlds ending, shows their respective level of maturity. As someone who has no problem with mutually consesual incest in real life, this story reflects how I imagine such a relation could occur and flourish.

Really well written and believable. Keep up the good work.

Please, come out of your apparent woodwork, and regale us a little more with the Taylor family saga. Love your work, and style!

Hope all is well!

Great story. It’s going into my favorite. I was secretly hoping that mom and son was at a nude resort and they started a conversation with a female who’s husband was off getting drinks. When he returned with drinks, he’s face to face with his wife and son.