by BrettJ
I am glad you listened to your two female readers,they were so right.This is a first class start to what I hope will be a series.Like many men mom/son incest coupled with lesbianism,is a real turn on as long as its handled well, and this is.
i do hope this story continues on and quickly and as for the two friends and admirers i do wish them both great well wishes...--domi
Great and hot story!
I really enjoyed this story and I hope that you will write a continuation of it.
18 year old Jim has sure got the right attitude. He's as hot for what his mother's got waiting between her legs as she is for what her boy's got jumping around in his pants. And they're going to let a stupid little word like "incest" keep them from doing what they're both real anxious to do? Mom looks over her "strong and rugged" boy, a star athlete, and gets very wet "down there." Jim looks over his beautiful, voluptuous mother and gets hard, harder than he's ever been before. They flip the bird to the shitty little word, and Jim sticks his big stiff cock up his mother's mommy-hole, the same wonderful hairy hole he came out of, up to his balls. He fucks his mother, he fucks the living shit out of her, just the way she wants it. He slams and pounds his mother's cunt, finally blowing his hot young balls and flooding her cunt with his semen. It's the best fuck of his life, of mom's too. Colette has other interesting plans for her boy, but Jim and his mother will always have this as well.
The story was somewhat ruined for me when you couldn't use the proper gender in your French. 'Mon couer' instead of Ma couer. Add to that, when Jim first had sex with his mom, you called him Thomas.
Great story! As your other commenters have mentioned, I too would love to see this story continued. Luckily you are not one of those "one and done" writers who start a series and then never write another word after chapter 1 so there's still hope. Please consider continuing Jim's Education as he goes for an advanced degree. There's still much that Colette and Kobe can teach him!!
The only thing that sucks about this story, is that it only lasted 2 pages..
Some writers can create a full fledged Storyline over several or so chapters.. Others can create a full fledged Storyline over 4 or 5 pages.. I was hoping a quickie story like this would've had at least 4 or 5 pages and was disappointed with only 2..
Besides that, it was a Great Read!! The Combination of French Blonde Mother and Asian Tennis Coach did it for me.. Managed to Blow my load twice while reading, but was disappointed because I had 3 more in me to release, but no following material for me to do it with.. I guess I'll have to find another Story..