All Comments on 'Jim's Legacy Pt. 1 Mina 09'

Just wondering why Mina doesn't have a guardian angel since she is human. Seems like a big hole in the plot. Otherwise, enjoyed the story.

I guess I didn't explain that well, and I'm sure you can find other holes if you look hard enough. If you do I welcome the feedback. None of the kids (sort of) do because they don't NEED one. I restricted the angel's ability to interfere to just uninvited Demonic activity (for the most part). Well they can all handle that on their own. Of course that begs the question why Jim didn't lose his. Must have been a paper work mix up. Or maybe because he wasn't born with it. I guess I was thinking the vampires losing their angels would have translated over for readers but then they live in my head so it was only obvious to me.

Loved mina story but why doesn't wade have visitation right to see her? I mean it like he is still being punished not just her.

Any ways great story Please keep writing.

Loved it. She keeps action going. Will continue reading all she writes. Love her.:-)

enjoyed mina series would like to read more

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