All Comments on 'Jingle Jangle'

by Swampcooler

Sort by:
  • 19 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More to come???

Hope you have more chapters to come thought this was a brilliant story *****

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Well the only plus for the whorish slut

Is that they are both still breathing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Way Cool

well, would hate it if that were my wife, but a really nice story, all's well that ends well.

yowseryowserover 4 years ago
Clever

The young/older mix is often intriguing, lots to play with. And of course, nothing like an eager, young, inexhaustible cock.

"Zach was no ladies’ man by any stretch but he knew that he couldn’t go wrong if he could make the lady come. "

Timeless advice there...

TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
A very yummy story!

Very yummy indeed, I hope that you'll continue this and let us see where they wind up! Thank you!

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Nice One

I don't usually like the loving wives category but this was a good one.

SkyfalconSkyfalconover 4 years ago
More

Hope you have a least one more chapter coming

maxx308maxx308over 4 years ago
Loved it

The story deserves a far better score than it has received.

Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Magical

I always love a story where I can envision the characters. Not sure about the ending but I did enjoy reading and looked forward to the next page. Hope there's additional chapters.

clarkgarbleclarkgarbleover 4 years ago
outstanding

That rarest of all things on LW. Credible plot and dialogue and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Really good story

But also really sad because there’s nothing worse than a past her prime divorced woman trying to receptive her youth.

No matter what, she and Zach don’t have a future and he will move on and she will be left with a dwindling pool of older men with little to offer and faces a bleak prospect of loneliness and disappointment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I really like it.

Good story. Very good. I could actually see it happening while I was reading.

Fatannf55Fatannf55over 4 years ago
WOW WOW

Would there be a part 2? Please

tennesseeredtennesseeredalmost 4 years ago
Engaging

SC can put together a story. No, it doesn't need a sequel. It is what it is.

ManoBlueManoBluealmost 4 years ago

I want a sequel to this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

More please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

At least this story has a positive note on the ending

oldtwitoldtwitalmost 2 years ago

Not a nice young man, just a cock hound really, well put together

TexMan1970TexMan19709 months ago

I enjoyed this story a lot. Well done!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous