All Comments on 'Jocks of the South Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
amazing

these keep getting better and better, really good job. I hope we get to see a threesome between nick and the two brothers. keep writing more this series is really good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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Great chapter! Wondering two things though, who is going to find Nick and Matt cuddled up together naked? And secondly is Nick gonna wanna go back to quick fuck with Francis after experiencing great, not only focused on Francis sex with Matt? Look forward to seeing what happens 😄

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fucking Hot!!

Now Nick needs to be spit roasted by both brothers. Matt needs to teach Francis how to really fuck a man. Nick needs to eat both of the asses, one hot and hairy and one soft and pink. Yummy! Keep it up bud look forward to your continuing story! And this one had me nuttin with the guys

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

This is the best chapter you have written so far, scott. matt is really hot and i'm surprised that he's even sexier than his brother. will francis ever join in on the fun? the river scene was really hot and i hope we get more nudity like that in the future. and i love how different matthew fucked nick in comparison to francis and it makes a really cool contrast between them. nick is becoming more confident with himself so i hope that continues next time francis and nick meet. thanks for writing, please continue to write more, i'm anxiously awaiting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Holy...

I was initially upset that Matt came into the picture, but that totally changed. Matt is fucking awesome! I, too, wanna see how Francis and Nick's relationship pans out from here now that Nick had sex with Matt. To be honest, I'm hoping Francis gets jealous and possibly tries to win Nick over. I think that'd be pretty cute lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. You write fantastically, so please keep it up! :D

canndcanndabout 8 years ago
Hot.....

And Nick deserved that better experience. I like matt. Hope Nick gets that he deserves more than what Francis can give him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Matt > Francis

I just love how Matt treats Nick on bed! He's so romantic. I hope he ends up with Nick in the end. Unlike Francis who acts like a douche and treats Nick like a trashy slut. I wish Francis would grow jealous of Matt. And I'm particularly interested with Marc. I wonder how you're gonna introduce him into the picture, Scott.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Amazing

This I feel was indeed your best..in this series. .. I Adore the way Matt..treats Nick.. Matt makes love to Nick... not just treats him like a hole 2 F--k..

Plz try to develop something with Matt&Nick.... not sure about Marc... but I believe with Nicks love of older guys... Matts a W.A.Y... better option... keep up your Great wrk.. lov the Writing...

judojonjudojonabout 8 years ago
amazing

wow just came on to this chapter and is one of the best i have read. So hot love the way you showed such feelings keep it up . cant wait for the next chapter thanks John

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved this one

This chapter is so far my favorite

Matt is so adourable

I really cant wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Everyone is saying how they'd rather Nick with Matt instead of Francis. I'm thinking Francis finds out, gets jealous, realizes how much he really likes Nick and starts to treat him better. Matt is around for a limited time and Francis I have a special bond with. You're overlooking how sweet and friendly Francis is to Nick after they have sex.

geemeedeegeemeedeeabout 8 years ago

This is a great chapter because now Nick knows what it's like to be intimate with someone who wants to give pleasure as much as they receive it. (He also knows what it's like to have sex in a clean bed, LOL.) I look forward to seeing if Nick is brave enough to demand better treatment from Francis. And since Francis has been bragging, I hope Matt cusses him out for not treating Nick with respect.

CuriousPeteCuriousPetealmost 8 years ago
Great, HOT chapter

This is by far the best of the three so far. Loved the fact that Matt appreciated Nick and wasn't just using him. And it was so HOT. Looking forward to more.

o2byoungo2byoungalmost 8 years ago
Love the intimacy

I was beginning to think these two were never gonna get it off. That was one looooong fuck session. I like the way Matt told Nick to come on and cuddle. I love cuddling and intimacy, something I missed over too many years.

It was really hot and enjoyable. Now for part 4.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Weekly dose

I really hope this is a 15 part story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Tom Pugh russell

I know its just a fuck, but he been servicing the brother for a few weeks.Brother has just been fucking a hot hole,, but still.Big brother stud is treating him better, is a damn horsehung man.I think, sooner or later he is going to fuck or be fucked by all three brothers.All seem like randy, hard fuckers who like a good boy pussy.I k ow Nink likes a good hard pounding.

Hutchison12Hutchison12over 6 years ago
Oh Matt

What a fantastic turn they had taken, Matt is a fantastic lover , and Nck is reveling in it. Am loving this series, it’s fantastic, you’re partner was right, and I think him for getting you to write for us, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Francis needs to learn some things

Francis fancies himself a stud and a great fuck. Francis is selfish, disrespectful, vulgar and demeaning during sex. Matt knows he’s a great sex partner. Matt is respectful, caring, giving, gentle, attentive, and appreciative. Francis needs to learn some things from Matt - and Nick is the one to make Francis realize that. There are signs of care and tenderness towards Nick by Francis, but they need to be drawn out more and then need to replace all the above mentioned selfish habits of Francis. I hope that Nick gets to fuck Matt (or a enlightened Francis). That would give Nick a new perspective and would ensure Francis realizes what it’s like to bottom. Great chapter. Super hot sex. Thanks for introducing the smoking stud Matt and for enlarging Nick’s sexual awareness.

JRSONJRSONover 3 years ago

Uh-oh... This sexy blond brother just caused Francis some serious problems! Good for Matt for showing Nick how great a confident, caring stud can be! I have not enjoyed they way Francis treats Nick, nor the way the naïve Nick has just accepted it all. He knows better now. Francis is selfish, and full of himself disrespectful and thoughtless! Don't get me wrong, I think the description of the hairy rough around the edges Francis sounds hot as hell, but he acts like a complete jerk most of the time! Not at all attractive to me. Two very sexy hot brothers, now fucking this younger guy, what could go wrong with that?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What an upgrade, Matt treats him way better

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