All Comments on 'Joe Meets Donna and Derek'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I love mixing semen

I love this quicky!

It's so horny to have the spunk of two men inside you. I did something like this once too and everytime I think back I have to finger myself, even if it's 40 years ago, when I was 20!

I think maybe I'll do this again. Any volunteers?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Lost grammar

While I enjoyed the story, I can't help but mention the distractions caused by the use of "taught" when you mean "taut" as in a descriptions of nipples. Many of you Literotica writers seem to do that. Maybe you just weren't taught to write right. Then, who uses the word "whilst" these days? That went out in the 1920s or 40s.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
a nice and mildly plausible (for once) story

very few here know much about grammer or spelling - lady writers usually do better though -

and why does every man and half the women always wear jeans - and drink beer - and drive trucks - and spend their time immersed in various recipients of water - preferably hot -

Literotica doesn't take the first half of its name very seriously -

but soporific routine predictable stuff - good nightcap -

here in europe where this yank lives - things are a tad more sophisticated

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December 2023 Wow, time flies when you're busy. You'll be pleased to know I am still writing, just struggling to find the time. I have posted a new story for you, Outback Affairs. Its about a family in remote Australia finding love ... with each other. Keep an eye out and I h...