All Comments on 'Joe's Niece Ch. 04'

Hope it is soon.

Can be a cruel old fucker.

Stan

When do we get the pleasure of your next installment... :-)

Excellent work, damned sexy...

Ogg want more!

This is a wonderful story. I can't wait to get Annie and Gail into the act.

Hooterhunter

I expect the coming chapters to be as good as the first four. The story so far was exceptionally well written. I look forward to continued fun when Ann and Gail arrive and we mustn't forget the faithful Lin and Bev and her dad.

Keep them cumming. A point of interest, chapters 01, 02 & 03 were completed in two weeks while Ch.04 took a further two months! Have mercy!

your stories are different,but sexty and don't hurt anybody.joe's niece is a good and fun read.thanks for your stories and the last one of this story was 08/08/04 and now its'12/02/05 one of your loyal fans.

BEEN WAITING FOR THE REST OF THE FAMILY TO ARRIVE AND CHOKE THE CHICKEN OR WHATEVER. NEED TO CONTINUE, BEEN WAITING NEARLY6 MONTHS.

HURRY,HURRY,HURRY PLEASE

story to good to just stop right there.finish the story.

The story was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! I didnt vote until I had read all 4 chapters. I gave & give you a complete thumbs up.

Good story, fun to read. Is there going to be an Episode #5??

Please, more. Don't stop here....

I read all 4 chapters and await the 5th, please lets get the 5th one soon

I know someting has come between us and your story. If, there's something I can do to help, please, e-mail me..........gene_mx@yahoo.com

It has been quite a long time since there was an installment to this story. I hope you will someday finish it.

You can't stop now, please give us more.

i have always loved your writing, but i really think you need to finish this.

is fucking someone else somewhere else and has no intention of honoring her promises to take care of me. Here we are, about 5 years after this incest started and the mom (sister) and niece #2 haven't yet arrived, the bi-gal was to screw her dad, and we don't know if they got it on, and niece #1 still hasn't been screwed by all the eligible guys at art school. Not to mention that no one is yet pregnant by Uncle Joe. Fortunately, at least for Joe, he has a sex slave and nympho niece to keep him happy while our intrepid author sorts out the situation. Jim, old boy, your erotic production has tailed off in recent years, and we wonder what happened. Did you lose your imagination or are you just getting too much pussy to have time to write? Fortunately, I am just down the list of your stories to letter J and have a lot more to read. Maybe by the time I finish the long list of your submittals, I can go back and reread this series and find a suitable chapter or two bringing this fine story to completion.

I have just read 1-4, and I am ready for more! I feel like I have been teased right to the edge of my orgasm, and then the guy I am with cums. GRRRR!!!

There are none that I have disliked, but this is definitely one of the great ones .........but 'why are we waiting'........where is the next chapter??

When will we be able to read more about Joe's sister and Gail getting deflowered?

Great story line, but has been too long!!

When can we expect it???

It would be great to read more about his sister and her two daughters getting that foursome going!

When?

You don't seem to like doing sequels but when you write to be continued... the promise is there. Your very loyal fans have waited a long time for this one. COME ON, PRETTY PLEASE!

I know I am late to the party... This is the hottest story I have read here. I was hoping you would continue with the story here. I want to be an Uncle Joe! SO HOT A STORY !!!

Impatiently waiting for 5.

and the screwed

and he came

they did it in the hot tub...

Where are the details of these two (or more) hot people having sex?

4 stars ... barely!

More details please!

Really, it's chapter 4 and you are still harping about the same thing! What a piss ant bweeb you are! You called the author a "MORON" (yes, you were screaming!), yet you complain about "SHITE LIKE THIS". Never heard of anything called "shite", so I guess YOU must be the moron! Get a life and find something else to read that you can enjoy, there must be something on this site for you! Asshole anonymous coward!

While I got pleasure out of the first few chapters the second two feel as though they are just repeating what has already taken place. His niece's friend could have just been some bitch they brought to make things interesting. What I am trying to say is that I could not get into the second half of this over the first and while I understand it was one of your earlier works it still stands.

I cannot fing chapter 5

Can't see Ch 5, but hate piercings, they turn something really beautiful into UGLY and sordid!! This is the first of any of your stories ihave marked down!!!!!!

All your stories are so very unrealistic and predictable... I think I love that about them though despite the usual negative connotation. I always know what to expect with one of your stories, and the sex is always good and you always seem to knock up the girls I wish you would. So all in all, awesomeness. Now If I could just find one of these that filled my recent penchant for pale goth girls with many tattoos and piercings - I think I'd be all set.

The "Harsh" Feedback: Give us a story where Mom and/or Dad don't know and would never approve, give us a protagonist/antihero without a huge dick, or who has no notion that his is anything special, give us a girl who doesn't want him, but despite herself falls for him and bears his child. Maybe this isn't feedback so much as plot ideas. Love that you've got a story with sequels, so many of your other stories could use one or more - that's more like feedback I guess.

Other than that, you rock. Awesomesause. Keep it up!

But, sadly, chapter 5 is not here. :( Based on the timestamp, it may never be. One of the sad things about Literotica; abandoned stories that seem to have a lot more story to tell.

damn why no more chapters

Need rest of the story please I am hook .so do not stop . CC.RIDER

Sigh, it's been 13 years now since this chapter was written, and a year since Jim Scouries has posted anything on this site. This sequence of stories started out a bit simply, but got better and better as they went along. It is a real shame that the promised chapter 5 never showed up, it would have been wonderful. I wonder if he had it written, and just never posted it?

Your a good writer and you have many stories that need finished. Hope you are well and hope we get to read more of your stories soon.

Please finish this

The fucking with Bev was unnecessary, should not have included her - bad enough having the servant Lin still servicing the manwhore STD-carrier Joe

Anonymous 5/23/21 really doesn't like our hero.

and nine days since this chapter was published . . .

Just sayin'

A few years have gone by and there is no fifth chapter, yet?! Bummer. Hope you pick-up where you left off soon and that all is well!!

will we ever see a chapter 5 sir

Need a chapter 5. Please?

Where is part 5 and 6 and maybe even 7? 17 years is enough time to get at least two more parts.....I would love to give you a 1 as punishment but the writing on this was great with outstanding bits of humor.

Why bring in bitch Bev when the racists already had a slave, and his niece and family

Oh the joys of a big everready dick and the women, including family, who love it and it's owner. Another exceptional chapter, well thought out and written. I definitely look forward to reading about his sister's and second niece's visit and ravishment. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination, memories and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your life, vision and talents.

loved this. Hoping there is a Ch. 05.

Your stories get more fucked over time!!

Once you introduce multiple partners in an incence story you fuck it up