All Comments on 'Jogging'

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MagicThinkingMagicThinkingabout 11 years ago

Wow! Had me going there. Wish it had been longer though....

JRMAN84JRMAN84almost 11 years ago
More dialog

Premise is a long reach and very hot. I think the story needs more dialog as the hero coaxes her into fucking a stranger into fucking in the woods. Maybe more of what goes through her head leading her to the blow job? What clicks for her to initiate that? Hero needs to talk her through orgasms after he penetrates her? :) A good story, but a classic if extended.

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