All Comments on 'John and Melissa Ch. 04'

like the series and yes you have me wondering where they go from here....more

I find this series to be very well written. Not at all hurried like some, but I would really love to know where these two are going and will their parents be accepting of their relationship. Please please write more and very very soon.

more,more,more!!! I absolutely luv this story!!

Great story. Definitely needs to continue.

what!!! thts it tht is harsh to no finish it this is a great story you have true talent

Bit of a bummer that they aren't bio bro and sis, but they clearly are in spirit. To that end, details of their growing up together would be a great addition toward developing a feeling of that sibling bond.

Wonderful, romantic story. Can't wait to read more!

I'm really loving this story!!! I hope that you plan to write more of it very soon. My one comment is that I don't really have a good picture of the 2 main characters. Your physical descriptions are a little vague. I'd also like to know where John was while he's been away and when he became motivated to come back home. Otherwise, I think your writing is very good.

you need to delete and rewite the series you give no background about them growing up and totally rushed them getting together. did they have feelings for each other before he left? why did he leave? why did he come back? what happens now? do the parents accept them ? this is a rushed portion of a story either post the whole thing or nothing and give proper details and use a realistic time line THINGS DO NOT HAPPEN AS FAST AS YOU HAVE THEM.

Very Hot.Keep up the good work.

That was worth quite a bit more, please consider more episodes.

I do like something that prods my imagination and I do not need a finite microscopic end.

I can't believe that you quit writing. That story just cried out for more. 2 years have gone by; please rethink.

Wow! That was like really a great story and good writing! Why did you stop? Would like to read more of your stories and about John and Melissa.

P.S. First comment on this site from me after a years' reading stories... So kinda want more...

A shame you never continued - maybe not too late, yet. This is a fine series, Misty; lusty, but lovey, too.

I really think this story is worth continuing. It was very nicely done.

Loved this and want more from these two hopefully still together and loving each other without interference from anyone else.

What happened? I would have loved too see what come's next. Like maybe Melissa get's pregnant, or, their parent's find out? I hope you change your mind and decide to write a 5th chapter for your fans...

MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More, more, more...

Definitely need more from these two!

Proofreading will find errors that need correction

So good to see they culminated their love for each other!! What a terrific way for Melissa to lose her virginity. John certainly knew how to give her the highest level of pleasure while deflowering her sweet vagina. I think they're in for many more great fucks as they continue their expressions of love with each other. Please continue writing and giving us (me) the details of their sweet maturing with each other. I wonder if Melissa's mom and/or dad have an idea about their love for each other and their amazing fucking experiences. If not, I think the sounds of them fucking at night will soon tell the whole story. When the wedding? Will others cum to their bed?

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

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Too much build up. I was getting bored through the first 3 chapters. I loved #4 that was what I was waiting for I gave it 5 stars. The other 3 were 3 averaged out. Don't wait too long for the next one. You are a very good author. Don't get too excited about writing your stories or you will skip parts of the story. Keep improving. I look forward to more of your stories.