by Skip1934a
A really sweet story, PapaSkip, and it's amazing how far you've come in such a short time with your writing. This was cute, playful, and had just enough of a realistic spin to make the coincidence seem like fate rather than contrivance. It was well worth the read (and I meant to read it tonight, but got hooked in!) and I'm so happy for you!
Good luck with the Earth Day competition!
FtF
please , Please, finish this story. I loved it so far.
I actually read this last night, but was too tired to articulate a decent comment.
A sweet story, almost innocent. I really enjoyed it. Now, will these two wake up and get together permanently?
I enjoyed the natural interaction between your characters. Good story!
Nice read Skip, Your writing skills keep improving. Keep up the good work.
DG
No need for a finish... it IS finished, just as it is... perfect. Loved it!
but completely enjoyable. Well done, skip. A wonderful romantic tale.