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A few seconds passed and then Marise shimmered in front of her, Mom gasped and Marise looked up towards the cabin and smiled holding out her arms at the same time. Mom looked at me gave me a hug whispered a quiet thank you in my ear and walked out to Marise, she went to kneel along side Robin but Marise would have none of it. They hugged each other and Mom turned once more to smile at me before Marise held her hand, both shimmered and then disappeared.
I got us drinks and we settled down on the seat in the shade of the porch to wait, Robin sat on my lap her head on my shoulder, she knew I was anxious about all this and she was doing her level best to keep me calm, it was almost an hour later when Robin and I were watching the tranquil beauty of the mountain I finally broke the silence.
"If my Mom comes back with wings attached you and I are going to have a real deep and meaningful conversation."
I'm sure my Dad and Jacob heard her laughter halfway across the mountain.
- COMMENTS
Rimmerdalover 1 year agoA very good story even with the grammatical errors.
However. How did all of this start?
oldpantythiefover 3 years agoThis is a delightful little story about love and magic, the problem is that it is hard to read at times, like using "know" when it should have been 'no'. Having to decipher what the author was trying to tell us slowed down the flow of the story. I know this has already been commented on so I'm not going be belabor the point, and just say thanks for a fantasy filled love story.
Horseman68almost 4 years agoThanks for a very excellent and absorbing read. Bravos. Going for more.
DeKreover 6 years agoVery nice stories ( not just the present ones) but I stumble a lot over silly homonyms; there - their - they're and so on. Do your editors actually read your stories or do they just pass a spelling app?
I know, comments like this are very unwelcome, but these errors take a lot away from basically excellent stories.
As I said, a pity.
