All Comments on 'Jordan and Debbie Become a Couple'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Final Chapter?

There should never be a final chapter for this lovely story. A next one , yes, and another after that!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
OMG

This story is simply exquisite in so many ways!

From plot, through character development, to the

incredibly sensual descriptions of intimacy, this

is a story that one anticipates like the touch of

your lover.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Final????

I think, and Im sure others agree with me, that if you end this story you may have a riot on your hands. I hope it never ends. However knowing that all good things must come to an end I sincerely hope that you will at least use your wonderfully vivid imagination to pen another story.

Jeff

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
never end this

didn't think it could get anybetter than the last.. but u jus keep on doin it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Please don't stop!

These stories are phenomenal. Hell yes I want to see the next chapter... and, I fervently hope, many more besides! Keep e'm coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Super, Boiling Hot!!!

I am a heterosexual / bisexual male, but I have found all four of your stories to be super, boiling hot. Your stories are the very hottest that I have ever read on any erotic stories web site. Your stories are in a category by themselves way above all the others. You should receive a very special award for this series! I concur with other comments that this story must continue as there is really no final chapter to it. However; take your time (as you obviously have in the past) to write the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
one of the best erotic stories I have ever read

yes please, another chapter, even if (sigh) it will be the final one!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
What happens this weekend?!?

After all the drama leading up to what Jordan has planned for Debbie you can't stop now! Please continue!!!! So far it had been fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Most erotic yet!

Damn! You get better with each installment. You have quickly become my favorite author. I cannot think of any other story that has been hotter. I can't wait for the next episode.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
SUPER HOT

This is smoking hot. The characters seem awesome. Please hurry and continue the story.

silverace1silverace1almost 19 years ago
The Very Best!

Please continue with this tale! You make me wish I were a woman to feel the intensity of being devoured with such love.

As a man who loves the taste of a woman and who could do it for hours at a time just to please my mate, I truly appreciate your stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Dripping

PLEASE right more! I'm dripping with sweat from cumming MANY times.

I want Erika so bad I can taste her!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
HOT

Your stories are VERY hot. Thank you for taking care of me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
OMG Yesss!!

5 is toooo small a vote for this, you are an awesome writer with a fantastic imagination, I love it!!!

dragonflysdreamdragonflysdreamover 17 years ago
Yummy!!!

I love your style of writing. I'm thoroughly enjoying your stories. I feel as if I am each one of these woman....feeling each one of them. Fantastic!!!

Can't wait to read more.

take care....

dragonflysdream

lovercat2942lovercat2942about 16 years ago
Thanks for helping me understand, Stacey

All my doubts, all my questions from the prior three chapters are answered here. What human depth Stacey gives Debbie and Jordan. And what intense sexual involvement between Jordan and Erika, in addition to mutual respect!! What depth of understanding of human nature Stacey demonstrates here. Awesome writing. What MORE could be in store in the next chapter???

2275jr2275jrabout 13 years ago
with deep and sadness to a beautuiful lady we will remember you

you and your stories will be sadly missed. may god be with you,

as we the readers are, god bless you babylez.

TheserialwaffleTheserialwafflealmost 4 years ago
Wow

I like your sense of humor too. The rest is obviously great! The sense of almost normality of Jordan appeals to us normal people. The stuff teacher-student is a little... off the possibilities but what can we say?the Bard’s liberty

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 1 year ago

Header: jordan and Debbie come together ...... 🙃 ...... Jordan and erika cumming togehter ? ...... You truly write in a detailing style and so i feel like sitting next to the girls and experiencing the complete emotional and physical roller coaster Too ....... But the was just day three and jordan is speeding or shifting gears, this might be getting out of hand

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💝🚀

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