by babylez
There should never be a final chapter for this lovely story. A next one , yes, and another after that!
This story is simply exquisite in so many ways!
From plot, through character development, to the
incredibly sensual descriptions of intimacy, this
is a story that one anticipates like the touch of
your lover.
I think, and Im sure others agree with me, that if you end this story you may have a riot on your hands. I hope it never ends. However knowing that all good things must come to an end I sincerely hope that you will at least use your wonderfully vivid imagination to pen another story.
Jeff
didn't think it could get anybetter than the last.. but u jus keep on doin it
These stories are phenomenal. Hell yes I want to see the next chapter... and, I fervently hope, many more besides! Keep e'm coming!
I am a heterosexual / bisexual male, but I have found all four of your stories to be super, boiling hot. Your stories are the very hottest that I have ever read on any erotic stories web site. Your stories are in a category by themselves way above all the others. You should receive a very special award for this series! I concur with other comments that this story must continue as there is really no final chapter to it. However; take your time (as you obviously have in the past) to write the next chapters.
yes please, another chapter, even if (sigh) it will be the final one!!!!
After all the drama leading up to what Jordan has planned for Debbie you can't stop now! Please continue!!!! So far it had been fantastic!
Damn! You get better with each installment. You have quickly become my favorite author. I cannot think of any other story that has been hotter. I can't wait for the next episode.
This is smoking hot. The characters seem awesome. Please hurry and continue the story.
Please continue with this tale! You make me wish I were a woman to feel the intensity of being devoured with such love.
As a man who loves the taste of a woman and who could do it for hours at a time just to please my mate, I truly appreciate your stories
PLEASE right more! I'm dripping with sweat from cumming MANY times.
I want Erika so bad I can taste her!
5 is toooo small a vote for this, you are an awesome writer with a fantastic imagination, I love it!!!
I love your style of writing. I'm thoroughly enjoying your stories. I feel as if I am each one of these woman....feeling each one of them. Fantastic!!!
Can't wait to read more.
take care....
dragonflysdream
All my doubts, all my questions from the prior three chapters are answered here. What human depth Stacey gives Debbie and Jordan. And what intense sexual involvement between Jordan and Erika, in addition to mutual respect!! What depth of understanding of human nature Stacey demonstrates here. Awesome writing. What MORE could be in store in the next chapter???
you and your stories will be sadly missed. may god be with you,
as we the readers are, god bless you babylez.
I like your sense of humor too. The rest is obviously great! The sense of almost normality of Jordan appeals to us normal people. The stuff teacher-student is a little... off the possibilities but what can we say?the Bard’s liberty
Header: jordan and Debbie come together ...... 🙃 ...... Jordan and erika cumming togehter ? ...... You truly write in a detailing style and so i feel like sitting next to the girls and experiencing the complete emotional and physical roller coaster Too ....... But the was just day three and jordan is speeding or shifting gears, this might be getting out of hand
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