All Comments on 'Josh Meets Carmen Pt. 03'

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UKCuddlyGuyUKCuddlyGuyabout 1 year ago

Again, great story building - but please please please include translations with the Spanish... I think "gringo" is obvious to everyone else, but the rest of it just breaks the flow unless you understand Spanish (which I'd argue most people on the internet don't)

OnThefence2OnThefence2about 1 year ago

You are killing me! I can't believe that you ended the chapter when you did. Please don't keep me waiting too long for the next installment.

Michell408Michell408about 1 year ago

You got me hook, line and sinker…. You got one one of the best stories going and loved all 3 parts and can’t wait for more …. And I mean more PLEASE….

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

English translation on what Josh said to Carmen's Mom

No mom. Carmen is stunning. Carmen is lovely. Carmen is beautiful. Carmen is divine."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is great story and will have to wait for the continued episodes.

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