All Comments on 'Journey to Mirage Ch. 10'

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dlew about 11 years ago

Very interesting twist

I'm glad that Rick is finally coming to his senses and realizing that all he is to Groton is a meal ticket. That was a scary scene and Rick should be careful. He may like having sex and be a bit of a nympho, but he's a good kid and doesn't deserve to be treated like crap.

Really liking this story of yours, lots of emotion and suspense. I think it's your best one yet.

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Not feeling good about this story.

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Not good.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...

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