by Moondrift
It is always a great pleasure to find a new story from you--a "return visit" as it were.
Welcome back Moondrift!. Great writer, great story. I look forward to reading more of your new stories.
I do appreciate your work, anytime I read one of your stories. I especially enjoyed this one.
unrequited love and so glad they made it together but i do wish you would stop making the man out to being a jerk...why do you have to do this.....really pisses me off.
But at least he got her pregnant and they ended up with a great life together with their child......like they say - vice is nice but incest is best...and so it should be.....
Finally, I've read one of your stories that's 5 stars. I knew you could do it..well done mate..
but why did you portray him as a bumbling brainless idiot....for someone in the wine industry he should have been more assertive and confident instead of acting like some pathetic school boy....spoilt the overall effect....