All Comments on 'Julie's New Job Ch. 6'

if this keeps up ... will be a very poor ending ... no revenge

I think you should hurry up and hang her by the throat but first get jon and julie out of there they dont deserve to be humiliated like joan has done to them.

Atlanta,Ga

The story sucks the way it is!!! You need to figure out a way to get Jon and Julie reunited and safely out of the organization and to have Joan and her organization destroyed.

keep then coming

piece of crap. Why don't you give up and go back to knitting.

Now I know Joan's angle for being so harsh on Julie !

You said to be honest and nice. Can't be done! This is BDSM strictly unless Joan gets put out of business and Julie and Jon get past this BS story!

Disappear her, that is.

But it seems illogical for everyone to simply roll over and follow her lead. Too many other people involved for this to not collapse. Poorly written at this point with just too many unbelievable things going on. I continue only to see Joan and her bosses in prison along with Mary and the Doctors.

Your exclamation points are out of control!! You must have bought an abundance of them on sale and are trying to use them up!! Every fucking sentence seemed to end with an exclamation point!! It's really fucking annoying!!

Jon should kill Joan, If he doesnt I will be dissapointed

But it's getting much better. Don't let the negative comments bother you. They are still reading it. Thanks, Cookie

Well, it is just great very erotic reading but have I missed the but if his Julie ends up under the control of Joan?

The descriptions of the sex is amazing burning the whole scene to life. You have a great imagination.

Can't wait to read the next chapter

The first chapter shouldn't have been written

Joan really hates Julie, and doesn't feel much better about Mary. To her Jon is just a possession that she wants to take from Julie. I want to keep reading if only to find out if Joan gets her's. Still a 5 Star Rating.

So now we know WHY Joan is such a bitch. Big deal. She needs to die now, or at least in the next chapter. I have to admit that this story is very sad and hard to read. It really turns my stomach, but I think it's because there is so much sex written in, which makes for a longer story instead of getting to a point of "story" telling.

Who is scoring this so high.