July 4th, My Sister, the Lake Ch. 01

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Amelia was the Hendersons' oldest child. Amelia was fucking gorgeous. Amelia dripped sex. She got out of her car. Her jet black hair hung half-way down her back and somehow, even in the dark, shined. Narrow face, long slim nose, brown eyes, unworldly full lips, and a body built through endless hours with a personal trainer. She sported pearls and her make up was, as always, perfect. She was wearing tight jeans and a white tee shirt - I'm sure both cost a fortune - and effortlessly traversed the broken ground in heels. She moved with total confidence, shoulders back, back arched. The crowd, as if one, turned to stare and Amelia accepted it. There was nothing forced about her; Amelia knew that wherever she went she'd be the center of attention.

Her Dad walked up to her. She offered her cheek. He kissed it. I looked around, saw Bella. She'd been talking to the Johnson twins - those boys had grown into hunks - but they, like everyone else, were staring at Amelia. Bella walked over to me. "I see your girlfriend's here."

"She is not my girlfriend!"

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TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGabout 1 year ago

This is certainly going onto my favorites list...Bella is HOT, and a red-head...my personal weakness!!

"Amelia"...uuuhhhmmm...NOT INTERESTED...just from the initial description, her 'entitlement' is palpable; she is obviously used to being the center of the group she is in, and others pander to this (dad/brother/everyone included). *As an aside...¿is she gonna be part of the sister-play? Hhhmmm??!!*

Five**5**Stars, well-deserved, and given with a sense of wonder, for the next chapters!!

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlover 1 year ago

I cannot resist. Listen you dust bowl refugee, if you ever took the time to make sure the woman had as much of more fun as you, youmight have looked for the g-spot! It really is Not hard to locate. The first time I found one, I pushed a bit too hard and she almost pee'd right then & there. That's your first and only hint...it is right below the bladder. Now go get a Grey's anatomy and read!

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlover 1 year ago

I am totally enjoying the uniqueness of the nerd sibling being the sexual aggressor.

Like situations in the real world. All that IQ rebels at being the deprived introvert. Instead she acquired a female friend with the acknowdeged ability to wow the opposite sex, and by exchanging some of her time and knowledge in the form of help with a computer assignment, got educated on looking her best and getting us dumb ass males eating out of her hand, or whatever else she prefers.

Excellent work!

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

Second time reading this. I probably read it about a year ago. I gave it a 5/5 back then but it appears that I didn't comment about anything. That's unusual for me to do that, especially since I enjoyed reading it so much the first time through that I saved it to my favorites list.

I still have the opinion that it's a top notch story, but Sam isn't thinking about anything emotional towards Bella who is obviously smitten. I find that to be disappointing. He's like, "oh! My sister wants to have sex with me! That's odd, but I'm down for that!" Not really the worst attitude, but I feel like he's still taking advantage of her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

To Anonymous, who tells stories and questions the G-spot: I'll say this, your dementia is producing more entertaining delusions than my in-laws'.

Excellent story, glad there's more to read! 5 *

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