All Comments on 'Just a Little Tennis Match Ch. 01'

Finally, the perfect phrase to describe the perfect organ.

Finally, the perfect phrase to describe the perfect organ. Of course, there is more than 1 PERFECT RECECEPTOR for the 'organic cannon', the only trouble is, there is absolutely no way to EVER be certain that we've found every receptor FOR 'the organic cannon'. We'll just have to keep looking & looking & LOOKING...

This is one story that I keep coming back to every few months. The sex is hot, but what really works is the tension later on, when Nicole is attempting to seduce the protagonist to test his loyalty.

Oh well done. What a great jerk off story, achieving its goal in flying colors, flying jizz I should say. I figure with 274k reads there were probably at least a quarter of a million cocks jacked off to this! Impressive for a first story. With all of the stories you've written, how many hundreds of millions of loads have been blasted reading them. You could solve world hunger at that rate.

I'm hoping that Michelle's room mates show up soon to join the party.