All Comments on 'Just a Nice Boy Ch. 01'

JimBob ... this was a fun story, but you're right, you need an editor. So here's the deal, refund my money to BonerBoy at FunBank via text at 6969.

As I said, your story was fun to read, thanks for the laughs and the boner!

JimBob you are demented. That's why this story gets a five.

loved it. keep them coming and cumming.

All the opening comments describing the writing style were absolutely correct. The story, the language and characters are brilliant. Well done

Thx for sharing. I enjoyed it and Dw what others think as they aren’t being paid to read it but they’ll always critique it that’s just ppl. I just wanted to say I liked it. :)