All Comments on 'Just a Short Walk'

Mean but stimulating... A bus full of strangers seems to take this erotic fantasy into dangerous reality...

the eroticism

Well done! so evocative. I love the erotic twist at the end.

Thanks for taking the challenge 😊. Remind me never to accept a car ride from you 🤣. Em

Delicious. Love it.

Emily - LOL 😆

Warms my dirty little exhibitionist / voyeur heart. Well done.

Djmac - glad you approve!

I seriously need to reconsider my opinion of pubic transportation. Well done.

(yes, the typo was intentional)

Oh, the pranks siblings can provide. I'd love to see the next 750 words describing the bus ride home.

That was really hot! I'd love to know what happens next, but with this kind of story I guess it's best left to our imaginations ;)

Add me to the list of those who want to read Chapter 2.

Shelby - nice one :)

RLD - thanks! These 750s are kind of the polar opposite of your stuff aren't they?

Such a lovely adventure, and very well written. My mind could envision every description you wrote and imagine every sensation she felt. Great story, thank you.

Who am I to criticise a mere male. So cruel but 5 stars.

This is fantastic. Amazing work.

Very cool and provocative.