by ilikeithot6308
OMG what a great series and the cat fight was sooooooooooooo hot in every way you can describe a scene and it's like we are there !
5 stars and wish i could give you more.
Please give us at least one or two more chapters as Dan and Karen continue their love and marriage trip.
Just LOVE your take on mature loving tall big-titted women! Best there's ever been! I was really worried when Karen began dating with other blokes, and provided Charlotte for Dan, but the way you resolved it was simply beautiful!
Don't stop now, a Cruise and wife follows. Then have the 2 of them get the wife drunk, and set her up to be taken. If not start another series.
You did a great job with this story! Would like to see an ending involving the Cruise and the wedding and a brief of their life after.
Keep this one going. There has to be a final showdown with the bitch!!!!
A nice touch, to bring in Officer Emily Brewster from "Arresting Officer"!
Again, thank you for catching that detail. I'd thank you personally, but you are anonymous :-(
Glad to see Emily brews terms making an appearance in this story crossover always a good thing for developing crossover stories keep up the good work.
Loved the story and how you brought it to a close. Stirring the emotions of them both and making them realize the love they had for one another
I love that you included a character from another one of your stories here. Emily Brewster from "Arresting" Officer"
5 stars. you are a really good writer and story-teller. and the sex is fantastic! just added you a a fav writer. i hope you continue to write for this site!!!
hmm wow long time no comments. I am curious if you took some inspiration from Criminal Minds in naming the office. Paget Brewset played Emily Prentiss
Montevideo/Punta del Este would make a nice cruise vacation destinationโฆ Uruguay. Great (unusual) story.
Lol, Dan was behaving like a weak wimp in the presence of his ex!! She really flummoxed the pussy Dan in the coffee shop
Still think they should have called the cops. Crazy bitch might return and burn down a house or two. Loved the story though.
Very, very nice chapter...lots of emotion in this one...
Ex-wife really should have been arrested for THAT behavior...assault, and trespassing...no Judge would deny a restraining order based on those circumstances!!? I hate paperwork, too, but really liked putting people who deserved it in jail...and SHE deserved it!!
Get married on a cruise vacation...yeah, that'll get the neighborhood ALL stirred up!!
Five Stars...๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ